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Stephen Drew's avatar

The places from where we rise. Powerful words, Rea.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Thank you, Stephen.

Mark Farley’s wandering’s's avatar

Oh my word…. the lifeblood of your poetry today, was / felt like truth, itself!

An amazing piece of writing. 🙏

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I’m so pleased it moved you. Mark. 🙏🫶

Mark Farley’s wandering’s's avatar

Yes it did, 🙏

Chris Keller's avatar

“A wretched worshipper of hedonism

Ruled by the ego in every choice I made”. Yes.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

How astonishing when we wake up from that trance.

AsukaHotaru's avatar

Rea, this felt like walking straight into the underworld with a lantern and somehow coming back with… wisdom? scars? a whole new spine? The way you turn pain into something sacred is wild — like alchemy with teeth. This was intense in the best, beautifully-burning way.

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It was a burning of the old me. A lovely way to put it. Thank you.

Stephanie M. Vargo's avatar

Extremely powerful. A beautifully written poem of redemption as the recreation of the self.

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Thank you, Stephanie. I appreciate your reaction to it. 🧡

Ink and Light by Nat Hale's avatar

So true the hard places bring great growth and unexpected beauty loking back

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Growth in unexpected ways. 🩷

Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Wow. Meisie. Waar van daan het hierdie woorde gekom? just incredible. 💞

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Dankie, Brenda. It was the hell I survived when I lost my beautiful son. 💞

Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

I could read that through the words. Rea you are an incredible woman. 💞

Rea de Miranda's avatar

I’m a crazy woman. 😁

Terry Angelos's avatar

Wow Rea, this is profound .

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It was a life-changing catharsis, Terry.

Terry Angelos's avatar

Looking forward to that coffee one day

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Me too, it will be a huge pot of coffee.

Virginia Curtis's avatar

What a journey you've had! This was evocative and emotional for me. Love, V.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Thank you, Virg. It was a crazy ride. Much love.

Beth L. Gainer's avatar

Rea,

This is such a powerful poem; in fact have you ever thought of putting together a book of your poetry? You write so well. This poem really resonated with me because I have suffered losses and have been feeling them a lot lately. Thank you.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Beth,

I am thinking about that, but I have no idea how to do it.

Thank you, my friend! ❤️

Beth L. Gainer's avatar

If you have a large collection, you can pitch it to an agent that helps people publish poetry, specifically the type of poetry that you create. You can find agents on agentquery.com. Conversely, you can self-publish through Amazon. Just some ideas.

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Thank you, Beth. I will have a look at it. ❤️🙏

Adrião Pereira da Cunha's avatar

This poem is a descent into anguish, yet it treats suffering as a doorway to truth.

Hell is not spectacle here, but a crucible where illusions are burned away.

The tearing of the heart becomes paradoxical pain that still pulses with sacred rhythm.

Madness exposes the spirit’s depth, stripping away the masks of survival and self‑deception.

Loss is reframed as revelation, showing tenderness born from wounds that refuse to close.

Love appears as altar and offering, a surrender that transforms agony into devotion.

The ego shatters, leaving fragments that no longer imprison but invite renewal.

Brokenness is not ruin it is the raw material of a new spiritual design.

Destruction becomes divine, a necessary dismantling of the false self.

In the end, the poem whispers that even in hell, rebirth waits in the ruins.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Thank you for the lovely conclusion of my poem, Adrião!

Ann Lyons's avatar

Entering into the throat of your demons, to reclaim your soul once more.

Powerful words Rea. I wish you courage in the battle.

🦋

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Thank you, Ann. I survived. ❤️

lchristopher's avatar

Dante is so prevalent here. Lovely.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Thank God I didn’t meet Satan, only my own insanity.

lchristopher's avatar

Yes, well.

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Thank you, Christopher.