Wow! You are commanded to shut out all else with only one master. This is terrifying. The height of control and domination. There is something chilling about these demands.
This reminded me of a few lines in this Lucio Dalla song called 'Futura' -- "Ma non fermarti voglio ancora baciarti // Chiudi i tuoi occhi non voltarti indietro // Qui tutto il mondo sembra fatto di vetro"
Wow! You are commanded to shut out all else with only one master. This is terrifying. The height of control and domination. There is something chilling about these demands.
A poem doesn’t automatically mean a relationship, Stephanie. It was a fleeting imagined moment.
So much tension! Very uncomfortable reading and very well done. 👏
Thank you!
Killer last line…eeek!
😁😁
Frightening.
I actually caught myself holding my breath while reading this.
There’s such intensity in the way you captured that gaze — how everything dissolves until only two people remain, suspended in that pulse.
It feels tender and consuming all at once, like a moment that burns quietly long after it ends...
This is a beautiful comment, AsukaHotaru! Thank you for feeling my intention. ❤️
That last line !
Thank you, Adrian. You get it.
While I died a million little deaths... 🖤
Thank you. <3
I will play Depeche Mode's World in my Eyes on repeat for you today :)
On repeat. : )
Take you on a long trip… Wow Josh! My heart.
Wow, this really captures a strong feeling that I’m sure many of us have had before. What great writing!
Thank you for your appreciation!
This reminded me of a few lines in this Lucio Dalla song called 'Futura' -- "Ma non fermarti voglio ancora baciarti // Chiudi i tuoi occhi non voltarti indietro // Qui tutto il mondo sembra fatto di vetro"
This is gorgeous, Jaap.
I had to look it up. Thank you for sharing with me.