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Debra Martin's avatar

We've been conditioned to call it madness. I think it's more of a recalibration of remembrance of the soul.

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There’s a quiet kind of courage in this.

To describe the storm not as an outburst, but as a rhythm — something that comes and goes, tears through and leaves traces — is something only those who’ve truly lived it can do.

The image of “shards of the insanity” is raw and honest.

And then there’s this line that stays with you:

“More than my heart can ever give.”

That’s not a confession of weakness.

It’s the recognition of a threshold — the point beyond which there’s nothing left to offer, and yet the heart remains open.

This poem isn’t about breaking.

It’s about what survival looks like from the inside.

No drama. No need to explain.

Just breath — painful, but real.

You write with remarkable depth — and with a kind of honesty that doesn’t scream, but still reaches the bone.

It’s rare. And powerful.

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