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Mark Farley’s wandering’s's avatar

Very creative! 🙏

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Thank you, Mark! 🙏

Ink and Light by Nat Hale's avatar

Love this so much. Thank you for sharing.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

I’m glad you enjoyed it, Nat. Thank you.

Stephanie M. Vargo's avatar

Love the rhythm! It feels like it should be accompanied by dance.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

It was an attempt to rhyme. The first line does remind me of a song. Thank you, Stephanie.

Ganga Sharma's avatar

Short and Sweet ❤️. Love, Ganga 🌹

Esther Stanway-Williams's avatar

Ooo, I liked this…it felt like seductive artistry!

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Thank you, Esther. Seduction was my aim. 😊

pen n. bolsillo's avatar

this resonates physically with tingling feelings down my spine. the surrender in this could be the definition of unconditional. dare i even say, love.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Thank you, Pen!

Beth L. Gainer's avatar

Gorgeous poem, Rea. It kind of reminds me of the type of poem someone getting a tattoo would write, but this poem transcends that, I think.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

You are right, Beth. It could be that too. Thank you.

Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Long time Rea. A beautiful post. I can actually visualise your words. It brings up beautiful colours. ❤

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Thank you, Brenda. 🖤

Nancy Hesting's avatar

Love this!

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Thank you, Nancy!