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Emma Steel's avatar

The sun burned low,

It’s day consumed, the fuel alotted spent

and so it sank,

drowning in the ocean.

But, it did so without surrender.

It did so in the knowledge that it would return,

defiantly sending apricot and amber fingers to clutch the sky in a last attempt to hold on before sliding away,

until it would claw its way back tomorrow.

Reborn.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

This is the most amazing poem about the sunset I have ever read, Emma! Thank you. <3

Emma Steel's avatar

Not bad for not being out of bed yet and without coffee.

I just reread it myself, and I like it!

I’m sure it’ll be a post in a week or two to gain a wiser audience - call out to the inspirer.

Now for a shower.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

I know that feeling! Enjoy the shower, Emma.

Emma Steel's avatar

Songs are poems too. That’s for sharing with me. 😁

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Love the song, Pen!

jybyky's avatar

Wow. Real beauty.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Thank you, Jybyky.

Harriet Corvine's avatar

Beautiful photos, Rea!

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Thank you, Harriet!

Bella Smith ⭐'s avatar

wow, the chauffer is my fav😁

Rea de Miranda's avatar

I am glad it gave you a laugh, Bella! :)

John Rinaldo ©'s avatar

Stunning

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Thank you, John! I’m happy you enjoyed it.

Palak Jangid's avatar

I wish I was there ✨💗 so pretty

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Thank you, Palak! It is lovely. 🩶

Deer Girl's avatar

Gorgeous photos ✨

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Thank you, Deer. 🧡🖤