The Waiting Lamp

[Priyal Pradhan]

Rea this is a gorgeous piece of writing. Every sentence evoked a vivid and heart touching imagery. The way you've written it, it beautifully portrays the pain of waiting and yearning.

Loved it 🌻

[Rea de Miranda]

Thank you, Priyal! I’m pleased you enjoyed it. <2

[Seajade]

So good…😊👌

[Rea de Miranda]

Thank you! : )

[Esther Stanway-Williams]

🥲

[Dora]

Rea, there is so much silence, pain, and devotion in this piece that it chills the heart. Your image of a woman waiting her whole life for an illusion is hauntingly beautiful and deeply human.🙏🏼

[Rea de Miranda]

I’m pleased this touched your heart, Dora. Thank you. <3

[Stephanie M. Vargo]

Reads like an old time ballad. A sad story of undying love. This story is an archetype.

[Rea de Miranda]

Thank you, Stephanie.

[Jane Deegan]

So sad, but beautiful

[Rea de Miranda]

Thank you, Jane. <3

[Jane Deegan]

You're welcome

[Marpy Hayse]

So well written... but, ah, it tugs at my heart!

[Rea de Miranda]

Thank you your lovely reaction to it, Marpy!

[Stephanie C. Bell]

This so aptly describes longing, wow the ending. <3

[Rea de Miranda]

Thank you for feeling it, Stephanie. <3

[Ryan Jameson]

I love this! ❤️ Thanks for sharing your work! 🙏

[Rea de Miranda]

I love your comment, Ryan! Thank you.

[Stephanie Marie]

I could feel the ache and longing and relentless hope behind every word.

[Rea de Miranda]

Your reaction to my words are lovely, Stephanie Marie! Thank you.

[Brenda - A Voice that Wonders]

O wow. That was just so heart breaking. But so beautiful.

[Rea de Miranda]

Life is heartbreaking, isn’t it, Brenda? I hope you will have a wonderful weekend. Thank you. <3

[Mark Farley’s wandering’s]

That was an emotional read, thank you Rea. 🙏

[Rea de Miranda]

Thank you for reading and commenting, Mark!

[Aster solenne]

Beautiful, Rea!!❤️‍🩹

[Rea de Miranda]

Thank you, Aster! <3