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Josh Datko's avatar

Babies do always seem to know the truth.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Strange that, isn’t it Josh?

Alicia Joyful's avatar

I love reading this, I will and could continue to read it every day as I am woken at 3am wondering why am I awake? I’ve learned to say it’s the witching hour and just be and enjoy it!

Rea de Miranda's avatar

There you go Alicia. Must be the witch in you. 🎭

Alicia Joyful's avatar

She is needing to be seen and felt. And wow there a lot of nausea that comes with her. And I am allowing it and allowing. Thank you!

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Give her power girl!

J.A.A. Arnold's avatar

I could feel the drumbeat rising in my chest as I read, like standing just outside a sacred circle, watching something ancient awaken.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

I love it when readers feel what I write. Thank you!

Mymy Khan's avatar

This is deliciously dark and atmospheric — it reads like the opening of a midnight ritual, heavy with lore and rhythm. I especially love the line “the veil between this world and the next becomes translucent” — it’s both eerie and poetic. The escalating drumbeat and chants give it a pulsing energy, like something ancient reawakening. You’ve conjured a truly haunting scene.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Thank you Mymy! I am happy you enjoyed it.

Mymy Khan's avatar

You're welcome :)

Emma Steel's avatar

I’ll meet you where the flagstones lay

Chalk in hand, candles in my purse

We’ll drink the unholy wine as we sing and dance

Celebrate the birth, the darkness let loose as the drums beat the rhythm of our hearts

And we witness the opening of hell and the running of the hordes

Long is the race, short is the night, so we must pack it all in

Let not one desire, one wish, or one boon go wasted

For that is the only sin we can commit.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

We'll cackle like old crones, dragging their bodies behind us.

Toasting our victories with ancient Alban.

Emma Steel's avatar

They will be bags of bone, light on flesh and heavy in years.

A deal is a deal and when payment is due we collect.

The ancient contracts upheld and enforced, drunk with the years ahead of us until it is out turn.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

I love you Emma!

Parker McCoy's avatar

I can feel the witches and night creatures rising in this one. As a night owl, I love it and feel an urge to hoot. I love the picture, too. Awesome post, Rea.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

I’ve been hearing an owl in the trees late at night for a while now. 🤔

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Thank you Travis!