Awww, so beautiful...🙏 I sat with your poem for several minutes, and honestly, your words touch the soul deeply. If I had to choose between Anaïs and your poem, I choose yours. Thank you, keep writing so wondefully ✨
This is absolutely stunning Rea! Every line feels like a small ritual of its own, imbued in passion and memory - much like how it feels when reflecting on a very true feeling of an experience with love. Truly beautiful piece!
The rough and tumble of love grows,
as it matures into the gentle rock and cradle,
takes longer, the embraces softer.
As it becomes less urgent and more intimate,
an act drawn out and relished,
it moves from the ever holding hands
to the comfortable stares from chairs across the room,
to just the satisfaction in the knowledge of proximity.
No longer a need for constant contact and affirmation,
knowing that the other will always be there.
As the physical space grows
it allows for the true depth of love to be experienced,
until finally there is a separation.
But the love still lingers,
held by nothing physical,
anchored in the spirit and soul.
A journey from the transitory infatuation to a deep and abiding love can take a lifetime.
This is beautiful, Emma! Thank you. 🩶🩶🤍
Awww, so beautiful...🙏 I sat with your poem for several minutes, and honestly, your words touch the soul deeply. If I had to choose between Anaïs and your poem, I choose yours. Thank you, keep writing so wondefully ✨
Wow Juan! Thank you for the wonderful compliment! 💗
wow, this felt like being in a dream
i loved it
I'm glad you did.
Beautiful- appreciating the flow and imagery in your poetry, Rea.
Thank you, Jen. 💗
Great imagery. It feels like a dream
I like the dream idea, Daniel. Thank you!
Amazing, Rea. Love sure feels that way for a certain time indeed—then later it turns into a warm cozy blanket. Namaste!
Thank you, Luis!! ❤️❤️
Long after the infatuation ends.
True that, Gabriel!
This brought me back to some early days of my own. Thanks! 😊
Pleasure! ❤️🤎
This is absolutely stunning Rea! Every line feels like a small ritual of its own, imbued in passion and memory - much like how it feels when reflecting on a very true feeling of an experience with love. Truly beautiful piece!
Thank you for your beautiful encouragement, Allegra! 🤍🤍
I like how this moves between sensual memory and something almost mythic
I love the way you interpret it, Jaap!
Memories, a lovely reminder. 🙏
Thank you, Mark! <3
so vivid! so real. so rea! beautiful moment capsulated in a poem. 😍
I’m pleased you enjoyed it, Pen. 😊
I love how your poem slowed the pace down, it allowed me to be in each space fully. Well done.
I’m pleased you enjoyed it, Terry. <3
Thanks for the restack Ryan!