This is hauntingly beautiful, Rea. The rhythm lulls like a lullaby, but the message cuts like a blade. So much truth wrapped in lyrical shadows. Thank you for sharing this chilling reminder of the masks we sometimes fail to see.
This sent chills down my spine. the whole idea of something so ghoulish sucking the life out of you is over powering. Well done on another piece of writing that cuts deep. I found myself drawn into the darkness of this poem.
This is hauntingly beautiful, Rea. The rhythm lulls like a lullaby, but the message cuts like a blade. So much truth wrapped in lyrical shadows. Thank you for sharing this chilling reminder of the masks we sometimes fail to see.
Warm regards,
John
I am glad it resonated with you John. Thank you for your heartfelt comment. I appreciate it.
Everything John said.👏
This is beautiful and well-composed. I've known a few people who absolutely fit this description. Thank you for sharing! Love, Virg
Thank you Virg! I know a couple as well.
This sent chills down my spine. the whole idea of something so ghoulish sucking the life out of you is over powering. Well done on another piece of writing that cuts deep. I found myself drawn into the darkness of this poem.
It is a bit dark and I'm glad you enjoyed it. The picture was AI generated and it fit in perfectly. Thank you Christina.
Ah yes, the emotional vampires—masters of the slow bleed.
They don’t bite your neck, they just borrow your charger, your time, and your will to live.
Next thing you know, you’re apologizing for their bad day and baking cookies for your own demise.
10/10 poetic creepiness—would avoid at all costs, unless I’m in a self-sabotage mood (so, like, Thursday).
Exactly Marie!
Beautifully hypnotic!
Thank you.
beautiful poem
Thank you Taffy.
My life has been eventful Jessica. Thank you for your beautiful reaction to my post. 💗
I am in good company. 😊